{"id":109,"date":"2003-11-21T06:01:43","date_gmt":"2003-11-21T14:01:43","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/?p=109"},"modified":"2003-11-21T06:01:43","modified_gmt":"2003-11-21T14:01:43","slug":"feedback","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/2003\/11\/21\/feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Update on both recent stories.<\/p>\n<p><i>Turn the Page (nee Dust Jacket)<\/i>, the instructor wrote: \u00c3\u00acWith only a few revisions,  this would be an absolutely first-class piece.\u00c3\u00ae  She wanted the point, that it was a weekend and therefore without well-trained staff, made more clearly, and  a bit more information about John\u00c3\u00ads duties. Otherwise, she got the dust jacket presaging the events and every other point I tried to make. There were many sentences underlined in red, with words like, \u00c3\u00acfantastic, great and good.\u00c3\u00ae<\/p>\n<p><i>Sirens.<\/i>  \u00c3\u00acThis is great.\u00c3\u00ae<br \/>\nShe liked the title (thanks to Adam who suggested it), she loved the phantom bear sentence (thanks to Adam for changing it from black bear), and \u00c3\u00acthe sounds of this factory closing.\u00c3\u00ae  The big quibble was the last line,  \u00c3\u00acWhen he says \u00c3\u00acI\u00c3\u00adm all alone at last,\u00c3\u00ae doesn\u00c3\u00adt at last connote relief? As in \u00c3\u00acfree at last.\u00c3\u00ae  <\/p>\n<p>I\u00c3\u00add have to say, \u00c3\u00acYep, what was I thinking?\u00c3\u00ae<br \/>\n<br \/> <br \/>\n<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"swimmers_sm.jpg\" src=\"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/archives\/images\/swimmers_sm.jpg\" width=\"360\" height=\"272\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\nFrom the Vineyard, last summer.<br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/archives\/images\/swimmers.html\">View larger image<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Update on both recent stories. Turn the Page (nee Dust Jacket), the instructor wrote: \u00c3\u00acWith only a few revisions, this would be an absolutely first-class piece.\u00c3\u00ae She wanted the point, that it was a weekend and therefore without well-trained staff, &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/2003\/11\/21\/feedback\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-109","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/109","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=109"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/109\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=109"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=109"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mainecourse.com\/mt\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=109"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}