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Thursday, November 8, 2007

Georgia On My Mind

Al is the last of Georgia’s generation left at Concord Lumber. Armand, Terry, Joe, and Georgia, they’re the guys I met when I showed up twenty-five years ago. A generation ahead of me, they knew everything, smiled easily and often and brought the past to the present. Georgia farmed the land Dan’s house sits on.

I’d filled the bed of my truck with tomorrow’s supplies when I noticed Al without his dark wraparound sunglasses. I walked up to him and I didn’t say hi, I didn’t even catch his eye first.

“Did you go to the funeral?”

Al looked at me and said,

“It was private.”

“Where?”

“Up to St Bernard’s. My plot is there too. About from here to the box away from Georgia’s.”

“The box” is the slider width room with a space heater where Georgia stood and waited for each truck to stop. He’d walk out of his box and match your lumber to your invoice. “The box” was twenty feet away.

“I heard he died about two weeks ago.”

“A week ago Wednesday. It was private but I went anyway. I went and ate my lunch.”

Eighty-four year old Al talks like I do. He’s way too sparse on the details. Like painting by numbers with half of them missing.

“What do you mean you ate your lunch? Did you go to the grave after the family left?”

“I sat in my truck next to my plot. I watched from there and ate my sandwich. There were only about ten people at the service. When they left I drove away.”

“Only ten? He had like two families. His own and he raised his wife’s sister’s kids after she died. And everyone knew him. You couldn’t drive by without stopping to talk for ten minutes. What about his sister from Tennessee or was it Washington?”

“And he had brothers, but there were only about ten. No one would have known he even died except it was in the paper.”

“And it was you who told me he was sick back in June. I went to see him at Emerson after his surgery, but he was out of it. He didn’t know me. Did you see him at home?”

“No, I did see him at Rehab. He said he felt so good he didn’t know why he was there. But you know what? He died just like they told him he would. They said eight months and that’s how long he lived.”

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Georgia always greeted me like his long lost best friend. I split my time between LIttleton and Concord Lumber and he’d chide me for being away so long, and he’d tease me when I worked in far off places like Newton or Wellesley. Said he’d been to Boston once and would never go again.

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Past stories about Georgia.

 

Here and Here.

posted by michael at 9:42 pm  

10 Comments »

  1. Ditto “avid” on Small Talk. Thanks for this, Mike. Be patient and don’t rush Al, Georgia …

    Comment by el Kib — November 8, 2007 @ 10:38 pm

  2. “Oldtimers disease” a wonderful phrase invented by Georgia (intended or not).

    Comment by rakkity — November 9, 2007 @ 1:40 pm

  3. Loved this story; this is one reason I read the blog.

    Comment by anon — November 9, 2007 @ 6:29 pm

  4. My thought exactly. We should create a task force to extract all of these great stories from the blog and make a book out of them (with appropriate changes of names where needed to preserve Michael’s life from outraged quotees).

    Comment by rakkity — November 9, 2007 @ 7:26 pm

  5. “Loved this story; this is one reason I read the blog.”

    Another reason might have something to do with whom anon is married to.

    Comment by michael — November 9, 2007 @ 7:30 pm

  6. Perhaps, but she did say “one reason”, and many of us would have spoken similarly had anon not set it elegantly forth for us. In other words, “Amen.”

    Comment by el Kib — November 9, 2007 @ 8:13 pm

  7. I agree with anon. Totally. And to whom I am married is not an issue here~

    Comment by FierceBaby — November 10, 2007 @ 10:01 pm

  8. A terrific trilogy, Michael, re-read anmd re-enjoyed.

    You are the master of succinct character development in the “short short story” genre — and should consider sending some entries here.

    Comment by smiling Dan — November 11, 2007 @ 9:51 am

  9. That site seems to be looking for fiction. Mike’s shortshorts would not be so appealing if the reader thought he was making his characters up.

    Or would they?

    Comment by rakkity — November 12, 2007 @ 2:46 pm

  10. Or did he?

    Comment by michael — November 12, 2007 @ 3:15 pm

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